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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care of their children in the evening in 2022. (rewriteja)

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care of their children in the evening in 2022. (rewriteja)
The data shows the proportion of how guardians in a nation allocate their
time
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supervicing
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supervising
 their offspring in the evening in 2022
Overall
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, fathers spend the lowest percentage of
time
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 with their children for every sector,
while
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mothers
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 spend the most amount of
time
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 with their children on dressing and
homework
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.
Both
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parents
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 spend
time
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 together playing games and preparing for bed. Fathers spend around 2% on dressing, 10% on
homework
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and
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, and
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 approximately 5% on
both
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 playing games and preparing for bed
which
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, which
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 is half the
time
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 spent on
homework
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.
Mothers
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 spend nearly 75% on dressing and 50% on
homework
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which
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, which
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 is
same
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the same
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 as the
time
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 spent by
both
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parents
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 preparing for bed.
Both
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parents
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 spend 50% on preparing for bed and 70% on playing games, which is slightly lower than
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mothers
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what mothers
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 spend on dressing.
Both
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parents
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 spend roughly 38% on
homework
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,
whereas
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mothers
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 spend just above 41% on preparing for bed

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, mothers, homework, both, parents with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • spend time
  • care
  • parents
  • children
  • evening
  • activities
  • influence
  • educational outcomes
  • social outcomes
  • demographics
  • single parents
  • socioeconomic groups
  • time management
  • child development
  • family dynamics
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