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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. what are the advantages and dis advantages of this trend?

There are
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arguments
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books
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 that are printed on
papers
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. Though some
people
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 find merits in reading
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due to
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 easy accessibility but often
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paper based
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 printing
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 more engaging
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 it's physical existence.
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,
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 amount of advancements in technology, everyone owns a
smart phone
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 or a computer.
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books
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 can be easily accessed by these smart
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machines
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anywhere. They can be read at any
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.
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 do not need to take the
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books
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 can be looked up at any
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 by a
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This
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 saves up
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 at home.
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 don't need any physical bookmarks and
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need not
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 to go
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 pages to search a
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.
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for example
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word by typing
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their
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 smartphones and find that specific part in that
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 within
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 pathway for a student and
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 office worker. On the
contarary
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contrary
, even though the
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book
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 is highly convenient, a lot of
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prefers
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prefer
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 the
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book
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 which can be held
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 hand and the pages can be turned.
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 of readers often claim that as they are going through the pages of a
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book,
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 they can
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about
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the things that are written in the
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, the
informations
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information
 learnt from
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books
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keep
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 in the memory of our brain for a long
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. But,
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paper based
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books
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are
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need to be carried along and
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requires
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 a proper space to be kept safely so that it doesn't get spoiled or
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torn
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 described advantages of both
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books
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, we can conclude that the
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 of
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 is much better and efficient
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its
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 easy accessibility
and
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 it is a positive trend to switch from
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paper printed
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books
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 as
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e-
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books
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 can be kept safely locked in a smart device.

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task
Make your view clear from the start and keep it to the end.
content
Add more clear reasons and simple examples for both sides.
language
Fix big spelling and grammar errors; use better grammar.
content
The essay tries to talk about both sides.
structure
There is a plan to end with a view.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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