Some believe that robots play a crucial role in shaping humanity’s future, whereas others argue that they pose risks and could harm society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

1.The study’s main hypothesis was that a novel pertussis toxin-insensitive G protein, referred to as Gq, activates PLC from bovine brain. The paper intends to fill a clear knowledge gap, as “the specific G protein… has not been identified.”

This

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is surely relevant to cellular communication, since “PIP₂ hydrolysis is regulated by a variety of hormones.” The idea was

further

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supported by the fact that, in most tissues,

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regulation “is insensitive to the bacterial toxins,” thereby pointing toward a distinct G protein pathway.

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task response

Your piece does not answer a full task. It talks about one study. To get a higher score, add your own view and talk about two sides, then give a short end.

task response

Add a simple opening sentence and a final closing line to frame the essay.

coherence

Make a plan: first intro, then 2 body parts with a clear idea, then a short end.

coherence

Use linking words to sew ideas together, such as and, but, also, however, then, next.

coherence

Keep each paragraph to one main idea and keep order in ideas.

content

The text uses direct facts from the study and quotes to show proof.

style

Short sentences keep the text easy to read.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

84 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.