In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reaons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many governments are experiencing ever-increasing
crime
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rates
due to
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economical
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economic
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instability and mass
immigration
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. I think solutions lie within the
government
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itself
,
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;
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they need to regulate
immigration
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rules and help
middle
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the middle
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class to
stabilize
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stabilise
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their income.
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with, owing to inflation, today many people are finding it very difficult to put something on the
tabel
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table
, even when there are more than two households working in the same house. Since it is becoming almost impossible to live
stable
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with just an office job, some individuals are turning to robbery, fraud and many criminal activities.
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, in
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the US
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US
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US,
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the highest
crime
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rates are
on
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in
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the
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apply
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cities that have the highest living costs
which
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, which
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shows the relationship between economy and
crime
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. Another important factor is
immigration
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. Lack of workforce in
blue collar
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blue-collar
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jobs
force
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forces
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countries
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to bring people from other
countries
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.
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some of them are very hardworking and contribute to the country's economy, there is a certain part that doesn't have very good motives.
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,
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if
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you roam certain streets in the UK, it is highly likely that you are going to get robbed because of immigrant gangs formed in those streets.
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, low income and
immigration
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are two main causes of
growing
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the growing
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number of criminals.
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, there are steps that
if
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it
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takes can help to improve the situation. The
government
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should initiate programs to help struggling families
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such
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, such
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as offering jobs or teaching them special skills that can help them
to
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apply
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get into working.
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, the
government
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of Uzbekistan launched secondary education institutions that help students who couldn't get into university acquire skills to help them get into
blue collar
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blue-collar
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jobs. Turning to
immigration
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, the solution
for
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to
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this
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problem depends on collaboration with other
countries
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. The reason why
single
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a single
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country cannot take measures by
himself
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itself
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is that the problem is caused by wars and instability in certain
countries
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,
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;
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besides
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to fix
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fixing
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the issue of
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immigration
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immigration,
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it is crucial to communicate with
neighboring
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neighbouring
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countries
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. As we have seen recently, Poland
despite
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, despite
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having strict
policies
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policies,
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is receiving
immigrant
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immigrants
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from Germany. So the effort should be collaborative between governments. In conclusion, movement of other people from other
countries
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and financial instability are two contributing
cause
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causes
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to
high
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the high
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crime
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index. To fix
this
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, the
government
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need to launch institutions or departments that help the struggling citizens to get a job.
Also
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,
countries
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should collaborate with each other to find a middle ground to tackle the
immigration
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problem.

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content
Improve task response by making a clear plan in the start and keep it to one main idea in each paragraph. State your view at the start and finish with a short sum up.
tone
Use calm and fair words. Do not say all pairs of people do bad acts. Add more balanced view and more facts to show you know both sides.
grammar
Check the small grammar and spell better. Fix errors like 'tabel' and check plural and verb use.
content
You show a clear view on the cause of crime and give ideas for fix.
structure
You give real examples, which make the idea feel real.

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