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The graph below shows people’s level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows people’s level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the proportion of
satisfaction
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 with the healthcare system in four countries, namely
Canada
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, the UK, the Netherlands, and the US, from 1991 to 2007.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the graph that there are changes
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 the level of
satisfaction
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 with the healthcare system in four countries.
First,
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it can be seen from the graph that the level of
satisfaction
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 in the UK and the US tends to rise,
while
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 the opposite
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 true in
Canada
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 and the Netherlands.
Moreover
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, the percentage of
Canada
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 decreased significantly. The number of levels of
satisfaction
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 in
Canada
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 began to drop sharply from 60% to 20% units between 1991 and 1998. There was an increase from 20% in 1998 to 40% in 2007. In the Netherlands, there was a remaining unchanged from 1991 to 1998 of over 48%. Ultimately, the rate went down by over 3% from 1998 to 2007. The statistics of the UK tend to rise substantially from over 20% to 29% units between 1991 and 2007.
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, the figures for the US began to jump considerably between 10% in 1991 and 14% in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words satisfaction, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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