Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Some
animals
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are
getting
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exterminated rapidly
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as
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well
as
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few other
animals
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are going to face the same fate. The essay will discuss how deforestation causes mass extinction of endangered
species
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and
then
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outlines
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outline
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how tree
plantation
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plantations
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and animal
conservatory
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can help to sustain their population. The primary reason behind extinction is global warming caused by deforestation. Forests are
sole
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source of their habitation and
food
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. In the
last
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century
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tress
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trees
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are destroyed to create more spaces for factories
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for farmland to meet the ongoing demand for
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for
increased
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an increased
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population.
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, vulnerable
species
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are losing their natural residence and
food
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for survival
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, leading
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to
gradual
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a gradual
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decrease
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their numbers.
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due to
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destruction
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the destruction
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of forests Amazon rainforest lost their 20% size compared to
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last
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decade
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significantly reduced the number
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. The best solution
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to
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this
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problem is to take
initiative
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the initiative
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of massive tree plantation and create
safe
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a safe
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zone for endangered
animals
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ensuring
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sufficient space and supplies.
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step will encourage the
animals
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for breeding
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to breed
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which
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will eventually increase their population.
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, Wolves were almost extinct
from
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in
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Germany in the 19th Century. The German government planted millions of trees over
years
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the years
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which
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created a dense forest
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. As
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as a
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result
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result,
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wolves are coming back, and their numbers are increasing gradually.
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,
safe
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a safe
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conservatory will ensure they are protected from famine and make it easier to study them closely to find
best
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possible approach to conserve them. In conclusion, endangered
species
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are struggling to keep their gene on earth
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lack
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a lack
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of safe
place
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places
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and
food
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supply.
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,
planned
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a planned
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forestation programme and
animal
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an animal
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conservatory will be
best
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the best
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way
protect
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to protect
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these
species
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from extinction.

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task
Answer all parts of the task. Explain why animals fall to danger and how we can help, with clear points.
structure
Clear plan to show cause and fix.
evidence
Good use of examples and place names to back ideas.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • species extinction
  • endangered animals
  • biodiversity
  • habitat loss
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • poaching
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • conservation efforts
  • legislation
  • enforcement
  • human overpopulation
  • sustainable development
  • responsible consumption
  • education
  • awareness programs
  • protected areas
  • wildlife reserves
  • international cooperation
  • collaboration
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