You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: •Where have you moved? •What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? •What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.
Dear
sir
or Fix capitalization
Sir
madam
,
I am writing regarding in change of my house Fix capitalization
Madam
address
and the concern I have with all the old letters being delivered to Use synonyms
old
Correct article usage
the old
address
.
My previous Use synonyms
accomodation
was 21 Correct your spelling
accommodation
sagewood avenue
,Barrie Fix capitalization
Sagewood Avenue
Linking Words
however
, I have relocated to
32 Punctuation problem
; however
toronto street
. I would appreciate Fix capitalization
Toronto Street
if
you could update my housing Correct pronoun usage
it if
information
as all my important letters are being sent to Punctuation problem
information,
Linking Words
last
Correct pronoun usage
my last
address
.
Recently, I Use synonyms
had
applied for a new visa card and I was expecting it Verb problem
apply
Verb problem
to be delivery
delivery
within two weeks. Replace the word
delivered
Although
I Linking Words
acknowlege
Correct your spelling
acknowledged
bank
about my Correct article usage
the bank
address
change, it was not updated in the online banking system. Yet, I am still waiting for my debit card.
SinceUse synonyms
,
Punctuation problem
apply
All
my private information is sent Fix capitalization
all
on
the Change preposition
to
incorrrect addresss
, I would be grateful if you Correct your spelling
incorrect addresses
can
not only block the card and send a new one to my current residence but Wrong verb form
could
also
digitally Linking Words
sent
me all the information . Wrong verb form
send
Therefore
, I can Linking Words
conitune
my pending works.
A prompt Correct your spelling
continue
respone
is being anticipated.
Kind regards,
Harsimran KaurCorrect your spelling
response
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structure
Put one main idea in each paragraph and begin a new paragraph for the next idea.
grammar
Use plain spelling and fix big mistakes like 'accomodation', 'incorrrect', and 'address'.
content
Explain where you moved, the problem with letters, and what you want the bank to do in simple steps and order.
tone
Keep a polite and formal tone. Use a normal greeting and close.
tone
Polite tone and clear closing.
content
It lists all three points: move, problem, and what to do.
structure
The letter keeps to the main idea of speaking to the bank.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.