The graph below shows people's level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007.

The graph below shows people's level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows people's level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007.
The given line level of satisfaction with the health care system in Canada , the
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, NetherlandsNetherlands and the US over a period of 16 years from 1991 to 2007
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is apparent that there were significant changes in the level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007 . The opposite trend was true in the USA remained the lowest throughout the period. Canada experienced significant fluctuations,
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saw a steady improvement over time.
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terms of Canada and the Netherlands in the year 1991, around 50% of Canadians were satisfied with their healthcare services, but
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figure plunged dramatically to about 20% in 1998 before increasing to roughly 40% by 2007. The Netherlands began at approximately 49%in 1991, and despite a slight decline to around 48%in the final year. In the
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and the US, the number of
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much lower, at only about 20% in 1991, but jumped considerably to nearly 30% by 2007. The US was only about 10% in 1991, but rose slightly to 12% in 2007 and
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improved.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • satisfaction level
  • comparative analysis
  • steady increase/decrease
  • fluctuation
  • health policy
  • government spending
  • global health crisis
  • public health initiatives
  • perception
  • speculation
  • historical data
  • implications
  • trends
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