The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the process by which ceramic
pots
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are manufactured. 
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, it can be seen that all of the steps are mostly done mechanically. There are 12 steps in the process, from digging the raw materials to finishing
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The first step is
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that the raw materials are gathered,
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then
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it is delivered to the factory. In a factory, once the raw materials have been crushed in machines, it is mixed with water. After that, the mixture goes into moulds to be shaped. When it has been dried for 4 or 6 hours in moulds, assembled clay
pots
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are ready. In order to be strong, all clay
pots
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are kept in the oven at 1,000 degrees Celsius. After each one has been colored into brown by manually, it is sent to colour firing. The
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step is finishing
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