The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.

The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015.
The bar charts present the percentage of Charlestown residents classified into four
weight
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categories in 1955 and 2015, broken down by five
age
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groups
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.
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the
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obesity increased with
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in 2015,
whereas
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in 1955, the ideal
weight
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category represented the largest share among all
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. In 1955, no one in the 20-29 and 30-39
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was obese, and all other
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recorded less than 10%. Underweight was the most common among the oldest
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, at 40%. Meanwhile, the ideal
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category dominated across all
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, peaking at roughly 70% for 20-29-year-olds, and ranging between 50% and 60% for those aged 30-69. By 2015, about 70% of people aged 20 to 29 were at an ideal
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, compared with only 5% of those aged 60 to 69.
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, obesity rose from around 3% in the 20-29
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to 60% among the oldest. The proportion of 20-29-year-olds who were underweight was the largest at 20%, doubled from the 60-69
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group (10%),
while
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the three remaining
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accounted for less than 5%.

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