Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge.

There have been some discussions over whether the human right to have
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to clean
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creats
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homes ought to receive it for free or not. I personally think that human rights
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not mean free accessibility. On the one hand, it is argued that
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are responsible for providing clean
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for
people
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's homes based on human rights for two reasons.
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people
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pay taxes, and
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and other
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are held responsible for catering
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basic
people
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's needs, including clean
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. In fact,
people
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have already paid the cost of
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they are consuming when paying a part of their income to
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.
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, the rate of public health can increase. It is evident that most
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resources are not appropriate for drinking, and they may lead to some serious diseases
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are detrimental to human societies when consumed by
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. Having said that, I personally concede that having
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to clean
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is a human right, but it should not be completely free for several reasons.
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, the
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of available clean
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is not enough to be provided for each person.
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, a huge
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of groundwater
initially
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has to be refined to be suitable for consumption. The
governments
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cannot afford to do it alone.
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, no one can deny
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people
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have
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to something for free, they do not pay necessary attention to optimal consumption. It can result in an increase in wastewater
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. With regard to the
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crisis, it may bring about some irreparable damage.
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,
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how much
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is used in any house or apartment is different based on the surface area those homes have. It is fair that
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who consume a much larger
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of clean
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pay more.
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, having
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to free clean
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as a basic human right for each home would result in
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level of hygiene and
also
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people
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have already paid its cost by paying taxes, but I completely disagree because of the
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crisis and its repercussions. Regarding
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the
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crisi
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and
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's
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when they
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with free services or products they receive, clean
water
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should not be free at all.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • basic
  • human
  • right
  • water
  • supply
  • provided
  • free
  • charge
  • agree
  • disagree
  • health
  • essential
  • sick
  • diseases
  • supports
  • education
  • children
  • focus
  • learning
  • searching
  • better
  • futures
  • reduce
  • poverty
  • families
  • save
  • money
  • spend
  • important
  • needs
  • promote
  • equality
  • chance
  • access
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