The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now.

The maps compare the layout of the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago with its present form.

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, the village has become more residential and recreational,

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accesible

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with the addition of a new bridge. One significant change is the replacement of the old fort in the northwest, near the lighthouse, with a children’s playground. Flats have been built in the space that was previously a film studio, opposite a playing field. In the northern part of the village, there were only four houses along the river.

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area has remained residential, but the number of dwellings has almost doubled in the present day. A school is still located to the south of Coast

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and is surrounded by trees. On the eastern side, a

road

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bridge has long connected Old Fort

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with Coast

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, another bridge has recently been constructed on the western side, and

this

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includes footpaths on both sides. A tennis court has been constructed near a newly built community centre, relocating the lighthouse site.

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The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now.

In many countries, children show less respect to elders. What are the causes of such behaviour? What can be done to address this situation?

The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People believe that Generation Z (1997-2007) are more dishonest than previous generations. What is the reason for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Which do you prefer: a high-paying job with long hours or a lower-paying job with shorter hours? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Some people believe that artificial intelligence (AI) will replace many jobs in the future, while others think it will create new job opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.