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The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of students from the US, the UK and Australia who studied in universities in other countries from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart depicts the comparison of
students
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 in the US, the UK and Australia who studied in
universities
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 in other countries over a period of a 6
-year
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 between 2002 and 2007.
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, it can be seen from the graph that there were significant changes in the number of
students
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. It is clear from the chart that the
students
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 studying in
universities
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 in other countries in the US
tend
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tends
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 to rise,
while
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 the opposite trend was true in the UK and in
Australian
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Australia
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 no changes. In the US, between 2002 and
2004
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2004,
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 the number of
students
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 fell gradually from 49000 to 46000
students
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,
then
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 grew in the following
4
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4 years
-year
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. In terms of the UK, the
students
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 studying in
universities
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 in other countries stayed stable
from
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at
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 30000 for
1
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1 year
-year
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, before dropping slightly in the following
5
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5 years
-year
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. The ratio of Australian
students
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, during the period from 2002 to 2007, the number of
students
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 studying in
universities
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 remained stable at 10000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, universities, -year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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