The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram explains the

sugar

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extracting process in seven steps from

sugar

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cane to dried

sugar

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powder as a

sell-prepared

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goods

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product

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The first step is

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growing

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canes are grown up from seeds , and after 12 - 18 months, they are harvested by either mechanical agriculture advances or farmers' agricultural tools. Afterwards, harvested canes are sent to a factory and go through crushing machines

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turn them into

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juice. In the fourth step, the juice

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through a limestone filter to make sure the product is completely purified. Afterwards, the purified juice is poured into the pot and is heated to evaporate a certain part of its water and

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turns into a

sugar

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syrup. So, the syrup is led to a centrifuge machine to separate

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crystals from syrup and in the final stage

crystals

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are dried and cooled to be prepared for packaging and distributing in the market.