The graph below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. Write a report describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. Write a report describing the information shown below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. Write a report describing the information shown below.
The line chart illustrates the differences in the usage of three types of fast food
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Pizza
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: Pizza
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, Fish and Chips, and Hamburgers
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, between
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between
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among
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Australian young people from 1975-2000
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the
number
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apply
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of consumption
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consumption of
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in
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apply
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Fish and Chips declined in the
last
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of
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part of
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the
period
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.
In addition
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, the total intake
in
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of
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Pizza
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,
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apply
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and Hamburgers rose significantly over time.
According to
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what is shown, the consumption of Fish and Chips started with
high
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a high
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livel
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level
of usage among teenagers, in 1975
was
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it was
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at 100, but in 1980
fall
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fell
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to 85, from 1985 the number of
time
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times
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eaten per year by youths
,
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apply
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dropped sharply,
at the end
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of the
period
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it
stoped
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stopped
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just under 40 in 2000. In terms of the usage of
Pizza
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, in 1975,
started
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it started
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at a low level just above 0
,
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;
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after
that
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that,
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it
incresed dramaticlly
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increased dramatically
for 20 years
, in
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. In
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1995, the intake of
pizza
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remenid
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remained
steady until the end of the
period
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.
In contrast
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, the total of consumption in Hamburgers
begun
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began
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at 10, after that the number
grow
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grew
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rapidly, in just 10 years it reached 85,
form
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from
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1985 the total rose steadily
reaching
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, reaching
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100 in 1995, until the end of the
period
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "differences" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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