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proposed during elementary school
. I believe that in
proposal, advantages outweigh the disadvantages,
the significant lessons they learn about cherishing all kinds of lives and growing sympathy
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others.
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, global awareness of
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animal welfare has been rising recently. All living things deserve the right to live freely without stress. It is
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who have poor knowledge and experience of taking care of them,
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be stressful when compared to experienced adults.
,
issue can be prevented by teaching them how to treat the
beforehand, and by
by teachers supervising
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.
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can teach them how to gently deal with other
.
, taking care of
and plants can
teach
the responsibility needed to feed or water them, because
it may affect their health. Learning meaningful lessons through
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experience in their youth,
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sense of sympathy and the attitude of understanding others who can't speak
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life in a positive way.
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fluffy
.
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, many people grow plants as their hobby for leisure. Going through
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greens and
,
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stress in the future, which
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.
, it is suggested that primary
should include teaching lessons about raising
and vegetables. Considering the effects of
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lasts throughout
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life, I firmly believe that the advantages
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the disadvantages.