The graph shows the proportion of tourists whoattended four place of interests in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.

The line graph indicates the proportion of tourists who attended four places of interest in Brighton from 1980 to 2010.

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, on the diagram we can see the percentage of 4 categories as art gallery, pavilion, pier and festival during the period. Another interesting point is that the festival had the highest percentage at the beginning of the period. But in the end festival got the first place. The art gallery accounted for 22%, and shot up to 37% in 1985.

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declined gently to 20% from 1985 to 1990. After 1990, it fluctuated a little until 2005. And fell slowly in 2010. The festival comprised 23% in 1980. It grew to 28% in 1985. After that, it increased a lot

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and stopped at 49% in 1995. From 1995 to 2000, it fell to 35%. It declined gently to 31% in 2010. Pier fluctuated between 1980 and 2000, and had 10% in 1980, 15% in 1985,

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10% again in 1990, 14% in 1995, and got 12% in 2000. After 2000, it increased a little to 22%

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of the period. Festival recorded in 30% in 1980, but declined to 24% in 1995, and didn’t have any changes from 2000 to 2010.