The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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males

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and

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females

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in Australia regarding exercise habits of a

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of ages in 2010.

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, Australian

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and women show opposite

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in age ranges, which both have fluctuations. The

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of

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the vertex in ages from 15 to 24,

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the peak of the

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of women is from 45 to 54. Compared to other stages, the

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of

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in the

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stage(15 to 24) in Australia exercising regularly was about 53%, ranking first.

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the

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plunged considerably in the next stage of 25 to 34, to nearly 42%. It continuously declined, and it reached

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with only about 40%.

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, the

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of

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who attend physical activities

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. Turning into the

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of women, it outraced

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’s

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in the

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of 25 to 34, and steadily surged to about 53% in the stage of 45 to 54, reaching a peak. It remained flat for the older

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, and

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increased by roughly 6%, hitting the lowest point in the eldest

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of around 47%.