You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline Company, write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your bag and tell them what was in it and what they were going to do about it?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding my lost baggage

while

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travelling from France to Toronto.

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I had already informed the airline about my situation, I was not updated

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the

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your airline company.

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commuting from France to Toronto

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last

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week, my belongings went missing. I waited for

atleast

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at least

four

hour

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before complaining to

airline

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the airline

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as I thought there

can

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be a technical issue.

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, upon

asking

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asking,

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I was informed that the passengers

have

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already got their suitcases. My luggage is

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a blue

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American

tourister

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suitcase with

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handle on the side. I have all my personal belongings: clothes, family photos, personal hygiene products and medications in

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. I need those things

immedatielty

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immediately

not

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only because of my

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personal need

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also

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because the suitcase was gifted to me by my father on graduation. I would

appretiate

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appreciate

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you could either courier my bag to my address or I can collect it from the airport as soon as possible. You can contact me via email or

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phone

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for any

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information. I hope you will consider it as an urgent matter. A

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response is anticipated. Kind regards, Harsimran Kaur

harsimran00265222

Sep 28, 2025

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grammar and structure

Fix big grammar mistakes and spell words correctly. Use simple, clear form. Each paragraph should have one main idea.

content

Add important details: flight number, date, bag tag, and what was in the bag. State what you want the airline to do, such as sending the bag or paying for items.

organization

Make short paragraphs. Start with a short reason, then describe the bag, then say what you want. End with how they can contact you.

tense

Careful with word choice. Use past tense for what happened and present for what you want now.

tone

Clear goal and polite tone.

content

Describes the bag and its contents.

content

States a request for courier or pickup.

closing

Gives contact method.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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