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few years
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have
moreVerb problem
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interested in travelling around the world
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matter their age or social status. In fact,
recent
the
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of
travelersChange the spelling
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has increased considerably
the desire of learning about the
, food, architecture and
of the countries and meeting new
.
, there are benefits of
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as strengthening social skills, independence, facing fears and valuing
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we are and
weCorrect pronoun usage
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have.
Nowadays, the idea to know more about our world, visit its landmarks, learn about its
and its
has motivated
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the Correct article usage
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to travel
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abroad
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themselves or with anyone.
, through
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travelingPunctuation problem
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can meet
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who let them establish new relationships
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matter the place that they visit. Considering my own experience, I truly believe that when I went to Australia
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instance, I could
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a place deeply, its beautiful landscapes, its kind
and its quiet lifestyle. In my case, I wanted to experience what
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living abroad with my boyfriend, assuming my responsibilities at home, buying
by myself my foodCorrect word order
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, working hard to pay my bills
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kind of job that I used to do in Colombia and improving my English level.
But
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what are the benefits of
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? Studies suggest that
like me who enjoy visiting different countries, get
, social and cognitive skills.
, when I travelled to Australia, I
could noticeWrong verb form
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that I
amWrong verb form
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able to do a lot of things that in Colombia I didn't do
as cooking, looking for a flat considering my
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budget, working as a cleaner, studying English and taking care of household chores at the same time.
, I learned to save money to visit cities as Sidney, Melbourne and Perth because I was really interested in knowing how Australians live, getting new knowledge about their
, cuisine,
and architecture. After living in
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I would say I am more confident, I could get over my insecurities, face my fears and deal
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anxiety
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now, for
it is easier to meet
and start a conversation with them in English, which is related to
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cognitive progress.
, travelling is really important for us in order to strengthen our emotional, social and cognitive skills. Our desire
of knowingChange preposition
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new places is because it
giveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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us more information about their
,
, cuisine and architecture in
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enjoyable experience where
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real
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we can get our own experiences of learning.