You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself, describe your plans for the party, invite your neighbour to come

Hi, Henry, my name is

emily

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Emily

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. I am a female and I have a dog and

cat

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a cat

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. I am a doctor and

just

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have just

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hire

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been hired

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panda hospital

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Panda Hospital

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near

this

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neiborhood

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neighbourhood

. So I moved

in to

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into

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this

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new home. I want to hold a

party

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to celebrate

this

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thing

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saturday

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Saturday

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evening. If you have time, feel free to join my

party

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! In

this

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party

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, I have

prepare

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prepared

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many different kinds of food,

such

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as fruit, cakes,

drink

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drinks

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, seafood, barbecue and so on. I not only invite people in our

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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, but

also

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invite my old friend and my

collegues

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colleagues

. I think maybe it is a good

oppotunities

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opportunity

to acknowledge

with

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apply

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more people. I plan first to eat some

foods

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food

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then

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we can

chose

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choose

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an instrument to play. I have prepared

KTV

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a KTV

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dance

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a dance

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hall,

football

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a football

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game and

swimming

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a swimming

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pool. We

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also can

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can also

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just

communicaition

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communicate

with each other to acknowledge.

However

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I'm

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afraid that

noise

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the noise

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of my

party

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may bother you, so if you feel

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apply

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interupted

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interrupted

by my

party

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, please tell me soon, I will take some measures to solve

this

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problem.

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as using

watch

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watching

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movies

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apply

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instead

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swimming

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of swimming

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pool activities. And if you have time to

came

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come

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to my

party

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, feel free to tell me some food that you can not eat or something you dislike. I am really

hope

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hoping

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you can come to my

party

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, I

could

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would

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not weith

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love

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to see my lovely

neighbors

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neighbours

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grammar

Break long lines into short sentences to show correct grammar.

structure

Use one idea per paragraph. Start with a short intro, then plan, then noise note, then invite.

tone

Be polite and calm when talking about noise. Say sorry if it may disturb them and offer steps to fix it.

content

You show kind intent and invite your neighbour.

tone

You say you will fix noise if needed.

structure

You tell about many party plans to share food and talk.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
35
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

236 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
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considerate
join
gathering
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socialize
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