The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries

The graph

illustrats

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illustrates

the contrast in sales for

dressing

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the dress

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industray

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industry

, which

are

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sent to foreign states, being sold and measured by

tenth

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a tenth

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of a billion (hundred

millions

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), in the years 1999 until 2003 .

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Mynamar

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Myanmar

experienced the most dramatic fluctuation in the given period, being the lowest in 1999 and

maximazing

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maximising

their profits in 2001, before the significant drop in 2003

being

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, being

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less than

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japan

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Japan

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although

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they had a good start, but slightly decreased in the shown interval,

in contrast

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to their

partnars

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partners

colombia

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Colombia

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, increasing slowly

while

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time passes at all periods. To start things up, Myanmar soard from being the least in the year 1999 with less the 50

million

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, to above 900

million

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in the course of 2001, before falling again to about 350

million

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dollars in 2002 being the least selling exporter in the end by approximately 450

millions

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while

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Japan

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and colombia competed and had their up's and downs, starting from

Japan

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being the most seller in the interval of 1999 until the mid 2000s by around 560

million

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, and lessening through time, as opposed to colombia, being expanded and increacing being around 600

millions

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in 2003,

while

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japan

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recorded less than 500

millions

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in the same year.

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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