Some People believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other People believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that allowing young

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to make their own decisions in regards to meals, clothing and entertainment options on a daily basis

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could produce a community of people who

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only care for themselves.

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, others argue that

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it is essential for

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to choose things that affect them. I

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completely

support limiting some

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’s freedom as they still need parents’ supervision and

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advice

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essay will discuss both perspectives, and

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I will provide my own opinion. First of all, giving a space for a child to practice his freedom

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might be an uncomfortable idea for parents, as juveniles still have not developed experiences to influence their future actions.

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, it is fully understandable if families have not accepted

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idea.

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, gaining experiences is a

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process, and can only happen if

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engage in situations that they have full control over.

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, if their son has chosen to eat junk food for a week, the stomachache that he might get

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will become an

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memory that will direct his food choices in the future.

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, he will learn that a negative action could result in negative

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consequences

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that might seriously harm the child’s health, and parents need to be responsible for.

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, leaving their son wearing delicate clothing during

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result

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flu.

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giving freedom

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of responsibility and

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self esteem

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young people are not old enough to make mature decisions. In conclusion, many individuals argue that leaving it for young individuals

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in a selfish community,

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others believe that it is their right to choose things that are eventually affecting them.

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my opinion, I think that parents should take control as their

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are not mature enough.