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Nowadays, humans are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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rubbish
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producing
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produced
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world
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 is more and more
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 humans
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because
 at present live more
people
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than
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live than
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 200
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years ago
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hand
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rubbish
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it
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is more different now
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however
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actualy
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actually
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electronic products and many
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objects
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use
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one
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time
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then throw away
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Consequently, we
 have more garbage than a
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first
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important
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to understand
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example
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example,
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 in the century 18 and 19 was just products
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this
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people
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 more different and too much
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because
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 a few times same product.
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for
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example
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 paper bag, a few years ago
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use
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bag
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bags
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 for the same activity.
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way
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this
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goverments
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governments
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reduse
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reduce
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rubbish
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 and they are
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doing
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politics
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policies
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 for that,
becose
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because
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importan
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important
save
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we
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this
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 can't really help
countrys
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countries
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citys becouse
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cities because
need
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they need
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 more
activims
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activism
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people
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. In
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conclusion
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 it is more
importan
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important
all
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goverments
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governments
create
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to create
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 new rules and strict
politics
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policies
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reciclage
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recycling
becose
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because
 a lot
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people
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of people
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producing
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produce
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rubbish
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 and
no will
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will not
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 stop forever.
and
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opinion
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people
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 need more education for that and more culture around
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reciclage
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recycling
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structure
Use a simple plan before you write: one intro, two body parts, and one ending.
language
Keep sentences short and clear. Use safe grammar and common words.
content
Give one or two clear examples for each point and say how the government can change things.
idea
The essay starts to talk about why rubbish rose and how gov action might help.
structure
It shows some plan with "first" and "second" ideas.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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