The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The flow chart illustrates the process of the life cycle of the honey bee
which
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, which
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takes around 34 to 36
days
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.
Overall
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, the process consists of six main stages, beginning with the eggs
are
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being
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lay
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laid
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from
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by
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females and ending with the young adult maturity. In the initial stage, the female
bees
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lay out one or two eggs every three
days
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. After 9 or 10
days
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, the eggs are hatched.
Then
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, which
become
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becomes
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the baby
bees
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,
this
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situation takes about 5
days
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to enter the next step.
In addition
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, when the little
bees
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grow up, they need to throw a nymph moult. At
this
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point,
nymph
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the nymph
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moult must take
three
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place three
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times in the life cycle of honey
bees
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. What’s more, it has a different
spending
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apply
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time
in
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spent in
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which every bee is moulted, among 5
days
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, 7
days
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, and 9
days
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.
Following
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this
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, the insects turn into young adults. In the final stage, which takes 4
days
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, and it will become
maturity
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mature
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words days, bees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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