The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the results of a survey on happiness rating for married and unmarried people in the United States, and the effect of
children
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on the
overall
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rating og married couples, including different ages in percentage. From the statistics, we can clearly see that
community
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communities
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who
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that
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are married are happier than singles. The rate of happiness in the youngest couples who are between 18 to 29 is higher than the others, but in a slightly different
.
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way.
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Also
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, the percentage is an increase in the
elderies
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elderly
who are 85 and over.
In contrast
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, the unmarried who are the youngest have the lowest
per cent
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percentage
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of joyfulness. The married couples who have
children
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are glad, but just who have under 18 kids are better, reaching 44%.
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, the families who have
children
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over 18 are less pleased, but
in
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by
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a slight decrease
by
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of
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3%.
Also
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, people who don't have
children
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are fine with 43 per
cnt
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cent
. In conclusion, the trend generally demonstrates that people who are married and have kids are happier than
the
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apply
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others, and just the
elderiest
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elderly
singles who are 85 and over are glad that they are singles.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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