In the developed world, technological progress is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of radical technological advancements.

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structure
Plan your essay: use a clear start, 2 or 3 body parts, and a short end.
content
Make the idea in each paragraph clear. One problem or one fix per paragraph.
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Use easy linking words to show how ideas go. For example, first, also, then, finally.
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Give real examples that fit the task and explain them.
language
Check spell and grammar. Use common words and short forms.
content
Some ideas on how tech can hit jobs and skill are seen.
structure
The essay shows an effort to join with the task.
general
The writer tries to give a way to cut the harm of tech.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tech
  • change
  • job
  • work
  • skill
  • learn
  • school
  • life
  • time
  • health
  • mind
  • risk
  • harm
  • safe
  • help
  • data
  • law
  • rule
  • plan
  • cost
  • money
  • access
  • fair
  • equal
  • trust
  • open
  • use
  • power
  • control
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