The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration presents
a
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apply
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data about the different parts of a machine that
works
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work
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automatically to take
a
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apply
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personal images and
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also
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are also
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,
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apply
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used for passport photos.
Overall
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, as shown in the
photon
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photon,
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it is like a small place that we can set
at
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up
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to get ready for the snapping, it has
small
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a small
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opening on the outside
which
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, which
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is for putting
coin
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a coin
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in it
so
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, so
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it can start.
First,
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the exterior of the stall contains a rectangular metal which we put money
in
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apply
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it
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apply
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to start and
also
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the setting of how you want your photo taken
like
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apply
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.
Then
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after that, the person
enter
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enters
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and
sit
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sits
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on the chair inside it. There is
mirror
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a mirror
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for a final
touch up
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touch-up
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and
also
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black
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a black
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sheet with
hole
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a hole
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directing where to look when the photo is taken.  Important tips
,
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:
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the curtains should be closed when the photo is taken
Linking Words
also
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, also
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, a flash will
appeared
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appear
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signaling
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signalling
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that the camera will capture after 3
second
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seconds
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.
Finally
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,the final product will be ready after 1 minute
and
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, and
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the person will take it
form
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from
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outside
Correct article usage
the outside
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booth.

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