Many people have realised that our whole world, is globalised now but not everyone supports that it is favourable for us. Globalisation have now affected each & every part of the world but it has its then fors and againsts.

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not is
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is not
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favourable for everyone
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because
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people
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of people
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thinking
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think
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this
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situation
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positive
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and negative us.
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the
word
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world
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need
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economics
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economic
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changes
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quickly
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into
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differents
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different
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products for long distances
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it is same important for grow up from the
countys
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countries
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first
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interesting
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is interesting
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when big
companies
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move money and products
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around
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world
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but
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understan
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understand
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difficult
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few
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countries because
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this
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companies
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do no
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no
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working
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for
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help
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apply
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apply
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specific
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, just looking
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for money
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instance
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instance,
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Cocacola
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Coca-Cola
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use
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uses
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resources
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country
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when
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making
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a fabric. On the
second
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other
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hand
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this
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these
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companies
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workink
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work
together
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with many
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governments
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example
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this
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these
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companies
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help
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poor
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people
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and give work
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all
people
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in any country, and pay taxes for that
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,
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think so it is 50% 50%
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colaboration
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collaboration
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in the
especifics countrys
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specific countries
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a
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apply
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problems. In
conclution
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conclusion
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thik
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think
it is important the
globalitation
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globalisation
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this
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one
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controls and smart
people
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becouse
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because
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word
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world
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, i
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know
is
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it is
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very difficult
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step by step
w
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we
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can impruve
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impruve
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improve
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Structure
Plan before you write. Start with a short intro that says what you think about globalisation and what you will talk about.
Language
Use easy grammar. Check spelling and keep short sentences.
Content/Organization
Give one clear example for each idea. A paragraph can talk about one idea.
Coherence
Use linking words to show how ideas go with each other, like 'also', 'but', 'however'.
Content
The essay shows a good attempt to discuss both sides.
Examples
Use of Coca-Cola example helps point a real link.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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