The graph below shows the percentage of immigrants to Australia from five countries in 1962, 1982, and 2002.

The graph below shows the percentage of immigrants to Australia from five countries in 1962, 1982, and 2002.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the percentage of immigrants to Australia from five countries in 1962, 1982, and 2002.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
immigrants
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from five different countries, including the UK, New Zealand, India, Vietnam, and Italy, to Australia in 1962, 1982, and 2002.
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, the primary
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came from Italy in 1962 and 2002,
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Vietnamese
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accounted for the main part in 1982. By 1962, the Italians occupied the major part (40%), which was four times as much as the British and the Vietnamese.
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, the Indian citizen was the lowest
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in
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year, just about 2
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. By 1982, the Vietnamese immigrant population was 2.5 times that of 1962. It replaced the Italian immigrant and became the dominant part. The number of remaining countries’
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increased significantly, especially from India. In 2002, the distribution of
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was average in all countries except New Zealand, just under 15%. Notably, the number of Italian and New Zealand
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declined continuously over
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period.

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