The three pie charts illustrate how many hours spent in a library by undergraduate and postgraduates compared to the total student population at a university in Britain

The pie charts show the proportion of undergraduate, postgraduate and all

students

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of the university in Britain by time spent in a

library

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, it is obvious that most

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undergarduate

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undergraduate

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spend less time in a

library

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than postgraduate

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. Half of the

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spend from 1 to 7

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in the

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, 35% of the

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spend from 8 to 14

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and

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only 15% of all

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spend more than 15

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Majority

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of undergraduates, namely 63%, spend up to 7

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of the day in a

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, 1/10 of them study in a

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more than 15

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. Nearly half of postgraduates spend more than 15

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in a

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, and only 17% spend less than 7

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there. In conclusion, the chart illustrates

half

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that half

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of the

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of

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British

university

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universities

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spend more than 8

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in a

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and

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they

majorly

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comprise

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post graduate

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postgraduate

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students

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