The maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now.

The maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now.
The illustration compares a particular
city
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's maps
in
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1950 and now. It is clear
,
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that there is a significant increase in residential area, business district, and size of the airport; now the
city
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is crossed by the lake, which is not depicted in the older map. The population increased 10 times
and
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it is 200,000 now, leading to an increase in residential area almost 5 times, mainly
to
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the southern and eastern parts of the
city
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.
As a result
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, the increase in size of airports and government buildings can be clearly seen. Building of the dam resulted in a lake that divides the
city
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into two parts; now there are two bigger bridges,
instead
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of one, small shown in the upper map. In conclusion, in comparison of two maps, it is undeniable that the
city
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and its facilities have significantly improved in size, and more roads are now available for citizens

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • city
  • map
  • 1950
  • now
  • old
  • new
  • house
  • houses
  • road
  • roads
  • street
  • streets
  • lane
  • block
  • blocks
  • park
  • parks
  • garden
  • gardens
  • shop
  • shops
  • market
  • markets
  • school
  • hospital
  • church
  • center
  • center
  • train
  • bus
  • rail
  • bridge
  • river
  • water
  • edge
  • centre
  • grow
  • growth
  • change
  • changed
  • expand
  • build
  • built
  • replace
  • replaced
  • there
  • there is
  • there are
  • now there are
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