The maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now.

The map illustrates the changes that

happen

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in a

city

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from 1950 to the present

,

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.

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Overview, everything had been

develop

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developed

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, even they had been building new things

such

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as

,

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dam

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dams

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and

lake

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lakes

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, the rest either

get

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got

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bigger or had new places.

In

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To

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explain

for

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apply

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all of that

the

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, the

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rapid increase in the

poulation

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population

it

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apply

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doubled 10 times. To start with 1950, in that the population was 20,000, and

city

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was small at that time, look to the business district it was a small circle in the middle of the

city

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, and surrouned with residential area from the North,

furthermore

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there was a government building near the

bridge

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in the South,

while

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the

bridge

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were above the river, and link the

city

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with the major road, which cover the main area in the

city

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,

last

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one is the airport were it was in the South-East of the

city

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.

Next,

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the present, at the

moment

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moment,

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the population had

significant

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a significant

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change to be 200,000, the business district has develop and became bigger and it excatly cover the middle of the

city

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,

also

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the residential area now cover the middle of

city

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from everywhere,

then

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the major road who has been changing as well to cover new places around the

city

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, and now there is lake under the

bridge

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instead

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of river,

although

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there are new

bridge

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in the East,

also

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a new dam, in the East, at the moment there two government bulding one in the business district and other in Soth.

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Finally

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Finally,

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the airport

it

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apply

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remain

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remains

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the same, but it

become

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becomes

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larger