Some say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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one of the most controversial debates is related to whether
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we need
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advertisement
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or not.When some
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think advertising is still so persuasive and convincing
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to buy any
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,
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others assume that advertising lost its effectiveness originated
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some reasons;especially the fact that
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boosted
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have boosted
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their awareness
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time,reading
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news or scientific articles and etc.Regardless of my opinion,I’ll
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analyse
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both sides’ arguments and
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decide where I am
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the “scale”. On one hand,some
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think that
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doesn’t
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don’t
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play a convincing role nowadays,
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,annoying
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costumers
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customers
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and demotivating
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buying
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from buying
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the
product
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.
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,
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them,advertisements not only affect the
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sales,but
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the company
as a consequence
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of irresponsible action.They can be right,but in my opinion,
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only
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on some
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occasions,
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,Starbucks’ political
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in the Israel-Palestine war made many
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boycott their coffee regardless of their advertisements or commercial intelligence.But,as I mentioned before,
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is only occasional
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besides
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, besides
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being optional and mustn’t be taken into consideration
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lack of examples. On the other hand,some groups of
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support that
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still has an indispensable role in our life,which led to a new and unprecedented
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term,
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“popular culture slave
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”,
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that is
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related to buying useless products only because of some peculiar trend or a fleeting social media phenomenon.
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some individuals,
people
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are highly biased to
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at the beginning of the process
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;
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in contrast
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,they can be strongly convinced to buy the
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at the end
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of the process thanks to a
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advertisement
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.We can handle some examples after
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explaining
the procedure.Food companies can be strongly criticised
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of conveying unhealthy food to
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, and
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and
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being
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not only harmful,but
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spreading
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spreads
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it.
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,McDonald’s confounded
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with a great example in 2021,introducing the dietic Coke Grimace Shake.
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it didn’t
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very good,
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’s interest in its containment,colour,and the story
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between the Grimace made the
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exploding
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and
booming
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boost
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its sales.Many other examples can be shown,presenting the advertising IQ of huge companies. Eventually,I
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think that
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independent
of anything,
advertisement
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will never lose its power of
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affecting
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,at least,in 30-40 years.
To sum up
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, advertising will always be in demand wherever there is humanity.

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organization
Try to show a clear map in the essay. Put the main idea in the first line of each paragraph. Use linking words to move from one idea to the next.
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Give a clear view in your own mind and keep it in the end as your opinion. Use more proof for each view with real examples.
linguistic
Fix grammar and spelling. Break long sentences into shorter ones and use simple, short phrases.
content
The essay tries to talk about both sides.
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There is a clear attempt to give an opinion at the end.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ad
  • ads
  • buy
  • price
  • value
  • product
  • memory
  • notice
  • attention
  • persuade
  • emotion
  • trust
  • message
  • claim
  • brand
  • audience
  • decision
  • need
  • want
  • quality
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