The table shows the proportions of schoolchildren attending four school categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the proportions of schoolchildren attending four school categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the proportions of schoolchildren attending four school categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides data regarding the percentages of
students
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attending four specific types of
schools
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from 2000 to 2009.
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,
it is clear that
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in the initial year, most children went to voluntary-controlled
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,
whereas
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in the
last
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year, community
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became the most popular. It is
also
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evident that the proportions of
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in special, grammar, and voluntary-controlled
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dropped,
while
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the community
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had an opposite trend. Focusing first on the categories of educational facilities
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popularity fell, in 2000, over half of
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, 52%, attended voluntary-controlled
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, with a following decrease of more than 30% by 2009,
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only a fifth of
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. Regarding grammar
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, the proportion of children there halved within these years, from 24% to 12%. Approximately 10% to 12% of
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preferred special
schools
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during these years. Turning to the
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with the increasing attendance, in the initial year, just over a tenth, 12%, of pupils chose community
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.
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, by 2005, the percentage of
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there rose significantly, by 20%, with a following increase to almost three-fifths, 58%, of
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there in 2009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, schools with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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