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Band 2

Some people think that schools should switch from print textbooks to digital textbooks on tablets, while others disagree. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, most of us
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devices
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 daily life, so some people have
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 that
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we should use
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 in schools
instead
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books
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of books
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. I will give my opinion later on the essay.
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texsbooks
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textbooks
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 we used
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 in schools,
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 method can be easy and
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 for the country to print books
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rather
 than give the students
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 can be
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extremely expensive
, because education is
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completely
 free
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 adding new technology
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 can add extra budget for the country or the students,
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as
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studying in
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paper
 can be healthier for your eyes than the screen.
On the other hand
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, having digital textbooks will transform the learning system, and shape it to
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 level as they can use the internet or websites to have
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,
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in addition
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,
this
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 can make the process of the course much faster and
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efficient
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 the doctors tend to send
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the
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us the digital books via email, and we use our phones in
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class. In conclusion,
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 see significant
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 of using
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a digital
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texbook
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textbook
, but for sure
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some
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circumstanes
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circumstances
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under which it may not be suitable,
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 so
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 careful is important.

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content
State your clear view at once in the intro or the final line, and stick to it.
content
Give more real reasons or facts that show why digital books are good or not.
coherence
Link ideas with simple words like First, Next, Also, But, So.
grammar
Make short sentences so the idea is easy to read.
content
The idea is shown and you compare old and new ways of learning.
coherence
You use a contrast word to show both sides.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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