Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There have been some discussions over whether the best way
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to get
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information about other
countries
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is
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by traveling
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traveling
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travelling
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to those
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or
using
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by using
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the information we can find on
TV
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and through online
platforms
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. I personally believe that both ways have their own benefits and
none
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neither
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of them can have priority over the other
one
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. On the
one
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hand, some argue that travelling to other
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not only is
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is not only
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a memorable experience but it
also
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allows
travelers
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travellers
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to efficiently get to know different cultures up close for two reasons. For
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, needless to
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say,
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travelers
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travellers
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can closely communicate with local
people
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.
In other words
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, they can
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see
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festivals and daily life, taste their local cuisine and even make
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purchases
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souvenirs
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of souvenirs
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and build a deeper
connections
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connection
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,as a whole. For another, it is a great opportunity to learn another language in
real
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a real
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situation. It is evident that the best way to learn a new language is
exposing
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by exposing
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themselves
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oneself
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to
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its
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contents. By travelling to other
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countries
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countries,
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people
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can talk directly to native speakers.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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consider
traveling
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travelling
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as an expensive and
time consuming
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time-consuming
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way to get to know different
countries
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' cultures
due to
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the presence of
internet
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the internet
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and
TV
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.
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, these days
many
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, many
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people
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from other
countries
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can get acquainted with
one
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another through social media
platforms
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.
That is
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to say,
people
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can easily make friends and talk about their own culture, the potential
that is
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possible for both sides
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, with
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far lower cost in a short time.
Additionally
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, using
TV
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and online
platforms
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for learning about other
countries
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help
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helps
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reduce environmental concerns because of transportation. Whether passengers travel by public transportation systems
such
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as air
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planes
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, trains, ships and buses or by personal vehicles, these vehicles are largely responsible for carbon dioxide emissions, increasing the greenhouse gas effect.
To sum up
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,
although
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for
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apply
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getting acquainted with different
countries
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'
culture
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cultures
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travelling
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, travelling
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and watching
TV
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and
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, and
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online
platforms
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are two common ways, both have their own benefits.
While
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by
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apply
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travelling
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traveling
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traveling,
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people
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could learn directly from local
people
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, communicate with them and more
importantly
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importantly,
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learn their language, using social media
platforms
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as a cost-effective and time-saving approach.

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structure
You try to compare two ways and give your own view.
coherence
You use 'on the one hand' and 'on the other hand' to show contrast.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersive
  • interactions
  • virtual means
  • cultural nuances
  • language acquisition
  • problem-solving
  • adaptability
  • sustainability
  • virtual tours
  • documentaries
  • sophisticated
  • realistic representations
  • comprehensive understanding
  • financial status
  • carbon footprint
  • digital resources
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