The bar chart provides key information about the
expending
on five various items by adults from 18 to 20 years old, in Check wording
expenditure
specific
nation. The units are measured in millions.
Correct article usage
a specific
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that there are five categories Linking Words
food
, clothes, books, smartphones and toiletries. Adults preferred the food in both Punctuation problem
: food
period
, Fix the agreement mistake
periods
while
they were less Linking Words
attractive
Replace the word
attracted
overall
Linking Words
about
reading the books in the same interval.
Change preposition
to
According to
what is shown, disbursing on food showed the largest share among all items, Linking Words
it reached
above 3500 in 2010, Wrong verb form
reaching
whereas
in 2014 Linking Words
recorded
just below 4500 Correct pronoun usage
it recorded
million
, in comparison with books, it offered Use synonyms
less
figures, just 1500 Fix the agreement mistake
fewer
million
Use synonyms
in
during all duration.
Clothes presented a little adultsChange preposition
apply
interested
, it had Correct word choice
apply
similar
proportion in both years; it was 2500 Correct article usage
a similar
million
, Use synonyms
likewise
in toiletries.
In 2010, Linking Words
smart phones
accounted for 2000 Use the right word
smartphones
million
, but Use synonyms
it
jumped to more than 2500 after four years.Correct pronoun usage
they