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Band 2

Do you agree or disagree with the saying ‘prevention is better than cure’. Write an essay of about 250 words presenting your opinions with suitable examples and evident from the war against COVID-19.

The saying '
prevention
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 is better than cure ' has no
oppositon
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opposition
 to it.I totally agree with the statement because it
help
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helps
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 in saving
resouces
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resources
, money,time and lives.We will discuss
it's
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its
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 importance in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 paragraphs. First and foremost, preventing something bad from happening can prevent loss of resources and finances.
For example
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, during
covid
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the COVID-19
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 outbreak
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, precaution
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precaution
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precautions
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 like social distancing, hand hygiene
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, etc
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etc
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etc,
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 were able to slow down the virus spread
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,
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which saved lots of money and resources like masks and other medical equipment, which were used in
research
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the research
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 of vaccination.
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,
prevention
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also
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 stops
situation
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the situation
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 from
being
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getting
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 worse.
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, during
pandeamic
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pandemics
,precautions taken to prevent
virus
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the virus
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 from spreading were not only helpful in buying more time to create
vaccine
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a vaccine
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butalso
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but also
 were able to reduce
mortality
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the mortality
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 rate to stop
thing
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things
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 from getting worse. In the end ,
i
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I
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 would say that
statement
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the statement
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 '
prevention
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 is better than cure' completely
justify
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justifies
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 its meaning.
This
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have
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has
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 been proved true in past and
also
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 in
present
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the present
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 times of
covid
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COVID
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and
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, and
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 will remain a fact in future
also
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 that
prevention
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 is always better.

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planning
Plan first. Say your view in one line, then write 3 small parts for the body with one main idea each and an example. End with a short restate of your view.
grammar
Use simple and correct grammar. Watch word form and the use of verbs with the subject. Use full stops and commas well.
coherence
Make the flow clear. Use linking words to show order and cause. Do not repeat ideas.
examples
Give one clear example in each body part and explain how it shows your point. Do not just name things.
spelling
Check spelling. Common words like pandemic, resources, prevention, vaccine should be correct.
content
The author shows a view on the topic.
content
The essay uses a COVID-19 example in a relevant way.
structure
There are some linking words to join ideas.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevention
  • cure
  • disease
  • virus
  • mask
  • wash
  • hands
  • distance
  • vaccine
  • test
  • hospital
  • save
  • life
  • money
  • cost
  • spread
  • rule
  • plan
  • health
  • risk
  • safe
  • protect
  • avoid
  • illness
  • outbreak
  • effort
  • prepare
  • future
  • public
  • society
  • care
  • careful
  • community
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