1.You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

Dear Raman, I hope

this

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of

spirit

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spirits

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. I'm writing

this

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letter to invite you

for

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a vacation. As the summer holiday is approaching, I've made a plan to visit Goa to spend some leisure time with my brother.

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, my brother cannot visit the place because he

has gotten

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had

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an accident

last

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week. Owing to a leg fracture, he is unable to join me.

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, I've not only bought two airline tickets but

also

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booked accommodation in a hotel. It is quite hard for me to cancel the trip at

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moment.

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, you're a travel

enthusiasts

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enthusiast

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travel person.

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It's

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been a long time since we met. I think it is the best time to hang out and explore a new place together.

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, I would like to invite you for a summer holiday. See you soon. Lovingly, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222

Oct 5, 2025

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structure

Some ideas stay in one long line. Try to use short lines or new paragraphs for each idea.

grammar

Use the past tense for past events: 'he had an accident' not 'he has gotten an accident'.

tone

Replace 'travel enthusiasts travel person' with a phrase like 'you love to travel' for a natural sound.

content

Be clear about who will go. If your brother cannot come, say so and show the plan with your friend.

content

The letter has a clear invite and plan.

tone

The tone is friendly and warm.

content

It mentions the reason for not coming and some trip detail.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

invite
holiday
friend
brother
reason
work
cannot
go
trip
place
coast
beach
hotel
room
budget
cost
share
plan
days
day
travel
train
bus
car
flight
book
ticket
market
food
water
swim
walk
island
boat
return
pack
bring
weather
sun
rain
please
thank
you
hope
come
soon
yours
best
regards
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