Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals hold the opinion that the main ecological issue of our time is the

biodieversity

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biodiversity

loss,

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others claim that there are more problems

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as climate change. I am of the firm conviction that both issues are to be in charge of.

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, we live in a world where ongoing

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construction

of factories and houses that lead to

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,

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are variety of species have been considered as endangered.

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, biodiversity is vital for keeping

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balanced, since it supports food production and,

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, handles the

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of climate change.

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, in order to increase the survival chance for the animals, the government should bring up

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,

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as creating wildlife

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corridors

that would help the species migrate from place to place.

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, concerns about global warming

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should be taken into account, since the rise in global temperature has led to more

frequente

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frequent

and intense natural disasters

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as wildfires, floods and heatwaves.

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, switching from fossil

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to renewable energy sources like solar and wind can significantly reduce greenhouse gas emissions. In

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case, international cooperation is essential to tackle global warming effectively.

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, both views

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by different

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of individuals are vital, since both are

contributiong singnificantly

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contributing significantly

to environmental problems

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I support every opinion since the internal and international

cooperations

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cooperation

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are

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a

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key in order to preserve

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planet.