In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

Nowadays
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many
people
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live in a
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rent
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home rather than buying one. In
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essay
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I will analyse
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topic from both
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a negative
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and
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view and express my opinion. There are many reasons why
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a building has a benefit.
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of all, most
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people
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people,
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specially
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especially
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yange
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young
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people
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people,
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like to live in a nice
pleace
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place
with less costs.
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, when they need to move on to another city or country
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,
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rent
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apartment is a good choice for them.
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, a student who has a chance to study abroad in
US
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the US
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buying a house will be harder and expensive for them
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, so
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,
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apply
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rent
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would be more
cheber
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cheaper
and convenient for them.
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, the disadvantages of being in a
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rent
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building
is
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you
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that you
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do not own the home, so you cannot sell it to make money. It is
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possible to say that the
avreage
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average
of buying is higher
more
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apply
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than the budget,
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moreover
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many
people
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find it difficult to pay for the
rent
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and save money to
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. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
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question . On balance,
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, I tend to believe that, having your own apartment is
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difficult
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, sepcially
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sepcially
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especially
with the limited
of
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income and
increased the
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the increased
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houses
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house
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prices. At the
some
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same
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time
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I find
rent
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is more flexible for everyone and it
allowd
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allows
for
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you to move on easily to look for
a
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apply
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great
oppertintes
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opportunities
for studying or for jobs.

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content
The writer shows both sides and a view.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rent
  • buy
  • home
  • house
  • owner
  • landlord
  • tenant
  • lease
  • contract
  • deposit
  • monthly
  • money
  • cost
  • price
  • loan
  • repair
  • fix
  • maintenance
  • move
  • stay
  • freedom
  • budget
  • plan
  • future
  • advantage
  • disadvantage
  • plus
  • minus
  • security
  • risks
  • rules
  • change
  • place
  • own
  • ownership
  • money
  • income
  • stay longer
  • stay short
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