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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
The bar chart presents the percentage of people in
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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 who held certain science qualifications, divided into four categories.
Overall
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, in both nations, the majority of people were not qualified in science-related fields,
whereas
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 people who had master’s degrees accounted for the smallest share. Regarding master’s degrees, both
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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 had an equal proportion, each standing at around only 3%, representing the least popular level of education.
By comparison
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, the share of Singaporeans with a bachelor’s degree accounted for 20%,
while
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 that of Malaysians was precisely half
this
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 figure, at 10%.
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, the figure for
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 leaving exams in
Malaysia
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 was the second largest category, reaching
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roughly 35%. Meanwhile,
Singapore
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 recorded slightly lower in
this
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 category at 30%. About 65% of residents in
Malaysia
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 lacked qualifications in science, making it the most common group among the four.
This
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 was followed by 60% in
Singapore
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words malaysia, singapore with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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