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sales
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figure
of three baked goods, namely the bread, buns and pies of a specific bakery in each month of 2014. Fix the agreement mistake
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sales
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was
$10,000 in January. Correct subject-verb agreement
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significantly from $20,000 to $40,000 between October and December.
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rose
,
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seems
to show an increase in the year 2014. Correct subject-verb agreement
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the amount earned from making buns rose by $30,000 from January to May, no obvious changes can be seen in the subsequent 3 months. Starting from August, the Linking Words
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dropped sharply from $70,000 to $30,000 Use synonyms
at the end
of the year. The revenue of baking bread dropped by almost 2 times between January and March, Linking Words
then
it fluctuated until September, when it started to increase back to the Linking Words
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the year
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