Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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task response
Plan your essay. Start with a clear view in the opening line. Then write two simple ideas in their own paragraphs and end with a short line that repeats your view.
cohesion
Make each idea a new paragraph with a topic sentence. Use easy link words like first, next, also, but, therefore to help flow.
language
Use only small, common words. Check rough spelling and put a point at the end of each sentence.
content
The writer tries to cover both sides of the topic.
content
There is some sense of ending with a view.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public service
  • Educational materials
  • Community hub
  • Reliable Internet connection
  • Digital literacy
  • Lifelong learning
  • Access to information
  • Resource allocation
  • Physical facilities
  • Online services
  • Subscription costs
  • Digital libraries
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