According to
some Linking Words
Use synonyms
people
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people,
tourism
is beneficial for Use synonyms
countries
, Use synonyms
whereas
some Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
argues
that it has negative effects. Correct subject-verb agreement
argue
This
essay compares the two different Linking Words
view points
of Use the right word
viewpoints
people
.
On one hand, right now Use synonyms
tourism
is one of the most vital Use synonyms
source
of income for some Fix the agreement mistake
sources
countries
. Use synonyms
Tourism
provides employment opportunities in Use synonyms
hospitality
industry Correct article usage
the hospitality
like
hotels, restaurants. It Punctuation problem
, like
also
boosts Linking Words
countries
' economies because of Use synonyms
this
reason Linking Words
they
are investing in Punctuation problem
, they
tourism
and Use synonyms
build
Wrong verb form
building
touristic
sites to attract Replace the word
tourist
people
from around the world. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Also
there are many Add a comma
Also,
cities
which are very dependent on Use synonyms
tourism
and Use synonyms
its
income is mostly from Fix the agreement mistake
their
tourism
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like
Punctuation problem
, like
tokyo
, Barcelona.
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Tokyo
On the other hand
, Linking Words
due to
cultural Linking Words
differences
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differences,
tourism
can bother local Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
japan
is one of the world's most touristic Fix capitalization
Japan
countries
Use synonyms
but
Punctuation problem
, but
japanese
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Japanese
people
mostly resent tourists because Use synonyms
people
from other Use synonyms
countries
Use synonyms
doesn't
show respect in religious places and sometimes cause environmental pollution in Correct subject-verb agreement
don't
cities
. Plus Use synonyms
it
increases the cost of living in big Punctuation problem
, it
cities
, creates safety problems and makes it harder for Use synonyms
people
who Use synonyms
lives
in those Correct subject-verb agreement
live
cities
. Use synonyms
Also
Linking Words
depending
on Punctuation problem
, depending
tourism
can be bad for Use synonyms
country's
future because after some time there is a possibility that Correct article usage
a country's
country
will lose tourists and Correct article usage
the country
this
can lead to Linking Words
economic
Correct article usage
an economic
crysis
.
In conclusion, both sides have valid reasons. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
crisis
countries
need to invest in Use synonyms
tourism
Use synonyms
while
satisfying Linking Words
its
own citizens Fix the agreement mistake
their
like
setting some rules and not accepting every person Punctuation problem
, like
to
their country.Change preposition
into