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The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use

The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use
The bar chart illustrates the
number
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 of visits to a community website in its first and second years of use.
Overall
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, it is clear from the chart that the
number
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 of visits roughly doubled in most months in the second
year
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. In June, there was a notable rise in visits compared to the first
year
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,
whereas
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 August experienced a slight decline. In the first
year
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, February and March recorded the lowest
number
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 of
visitors
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, with just around 1,000 each.
In contrast
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, August saw the highest figure, at approximately 15,000. The
number
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 of
visitors
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 in July was roughly 13,000,
while
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 June had about 12,000. December and November were very similar, with approximately 10,000
visitors
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 each. During the second
year
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, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 increased sharply in most months. Both June and July experienced a dramatic rise, reaching 22,500. December and November again recorded similar figures, at around 17,500,
while
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 March and February rose significantly from about 1,000 to 10,000
visitors
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, year, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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