The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the layout for a new factory complex, housing area and facilities for employees.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the plan is
organized
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organised
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around a
circle
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circular
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rouad
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road
, with
industrial
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the industrial
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area located in the
center
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centre
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, surrounded by offices,
meetings
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meeting
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rooms, housing, and leisure facilities. The picture seems to separate the house areas from
main
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the main
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production zones
while
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keeping all areas easily accessible. Looking at the map closely, one can see that there are
saveral
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several
industrial buildings
along with
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an office to the northwest and a meeting room to the southeast in the central part of the plan. The residential zones are mainly distributed in the western and northeastern parts. As for other facilities, a parking area is provided in the northwest,
while
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a swimming pool is placed in the northeast, near the houses.
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, some smaller industrial buildings can be found in the southeast, showing a clear distinction between work and residential zones.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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