Recent research has confirmed that “human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life". Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

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of human activity
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nature
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indicate
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that
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is a major threat to plant and animal life. There are a lot of reasons to
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research. I believe, solution should be
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out by ourselves as
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. Nature has been maintaining its rhythm
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thousands of years.
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, human activity became
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greatest threat
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system and destroyed
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by step.
Airpolution
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Air pollution
, toxic and
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non-recyclable
waste and overpopulation are some examples
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the
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consequences
of human
activites
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activities
.
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, the
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hundreds
of plant and animal species are in danger of extinction
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it can be clearly said that
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numbers will increase each day if some measures are not
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taken. When it comes to how
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reduce the negative impact on other lives as humans,
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awareness
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issue is a significant step.
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there are some people who have
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awareness
, others have no idea about the crisis.
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, governments and activists should conduct campaigns to raise
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awareness
.
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recyclable
products may be increased
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of
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non-recyclable
ones. By
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means, the waste of human
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activities
can be degradable and sustainable in the environment. In conclusion,
humanity
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has become the greatest threat to
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nature and other lives.
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, if we take some measures, we may decrease
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impact of
humanity
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over the years and save the species in danger of extinction.

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Plan your essay with two clear parts: why this has happened and how we can cut the harm. Use one idea per paragraph and link them well.
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coherence
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lexis
Use plain words from the top 100 and avoid long or hard words.
content
The essay talks about both why and how to act.
structure
There is a clear plan with an intro, body and conclusion.
ideas
Some good ideas are given, like awareness and recycled goods.

Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • biodiversity
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • overexploitation
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable agriculture
  • forestry
  • pollution controls
  • waste management
  • conservation efforts
  • protected areas
  • environmental contamination
  • sustainable lifestyles
  • policy changes
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