One of your friend has ask you to be business partner in his or her start up business. Write a letter o him or her and say what is your opinion his business idea What have you decided on this matter What are the reasons for your decision.

Dear Mina, Hello,

How

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are you? I am glad to know about your new

start

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start-up

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up which is coming soon in our town near

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apply

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the city college. First of all, I

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you

to give

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me time to think about

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this

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opportunity. I am excited to tell you that I am accepting your business proposal request. First and foremost,

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my understanding

opening

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a restaurant near

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the college

going

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to be

crazy

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deal for us as it would bring more foot traffic to the store and make it beneficial for our business. As you know, it is our dream to open a store like

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since we are in college

and

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today there is no way that I am going to

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offer even with my busy schedule.

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, as I am already running a similar branch in the busy downtown area so I would definitely bring up some good points to support you so you will not face any issues. I am eagerly waiting to join you

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weekend over

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cup of coffee to discuss more about it. Cheers, Nikhil

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Oct 7, 2025

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Task response

Say your decision clearly in the first part and keep one main point per paragraph. Use one plan for next steps.

Coherence and cohesion

Use simple links to show how the ideas go together. Start with 'First', 'Next', 'Also', 'Finally', and keep each paragraph with one main idea.

Task response

The letter keeps a warm and friendly tone for a friend.

Coherence and cohesion

You give a clear reason about your past work to help your choice.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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